A familiar/unfamiliar you,
To fit not-quite-right
With a not-quite-identical me,
And a fragile rebuilding
Of a new us, here in this
Always-known, entirely-new place,
Surrounded by self-absorbed others,
And us, each observing the other,
And an end to the careful distance
Of 3+ years of disembodied talks.
9 comments:
try listening to progressive rock .. dream theatre etc. u will like it.
ok. btw, how did you find my blog?
i am a drifter .... i go on reading stuff i lyk ... if u hav any probs ..let me know ... if the author doesnt want me to see her poem .. i will back off!! if u wanted to , see my blog
oh no. just curious.
are u onl9 ?
Eloquent!!
^_^
btw I'm blogrolling you..(both blogs i checked... :)
and thanks for the visit...
@jadis,
thanks. I need to update my bogroll too. Let's see when it's finally done. Really like your posts, btw.
When I sat with u amongst those self-absorbed people all around....there was a large canvas mirroring u and me sitting vis-a-vis....my elements ran palpably strong...thanx u made the moment immortal.
I'm glad and heart-struck that you felt something, perhaps, like what I did. I couldn't not write this, my dear, you know that.
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